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lchristopher's avatar

Loved the story but there is not a man on the planet that determines a woman's haircut as more smart than sexy. Not one that kisses pussy anyway. Great work.

20th Century Fox's avatar

Well, he’s certainty not like other men 🤓 💋

MoTy's avatar

LOVE reading you! Absolute banger x

20th Century Fox's avatar

That makes me sooo happy! 😊💜

Virginia Curtis's avatar

This was a wonderful little story. It captured longing and logic in equal measure. Love, Virg

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Thank you Virg!! 💋 💋

lcrt_ dvn's avatar

✍️” Because there was always a moment where the story became indecent.” - so good, the heart of this text

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Thank you for reading and saying that. The story could easily have actually turned indecent. But he held back, the little Monsieur ❤️🤓

Steve Baker's avatar

Dear Sylvie,

Reading your story stirred up a little of my own past ... back when I was shy as Moreau, even though my friends swore otherwise. I’d tell them I’d spoken to a woman and they’d laugh, knowing those old fire‑engine‑red Panhead days when I rode with long blond hair and more confidence than sense. I was young, fit, and full of that wild weekend bravado men grow out of eventually. Funny how a man can be bold on the road and still tongue‑tied in front of a woman he actually admires.

Your piece brought that back ... the quiet ache, the imagined tenderness, the way longing can feel bigger than the man carrying it. Salt‑air melancholy, dust on the argyles, and a heart remembering itself.

Steven

Stephen's avatar

kudos for including the argyle socks!

20th Century Fox's avatar

Haha they are the best

Stephen's avatar

Im wearing one flamingo sock.

one Christmas tree.

Chris Keller's avatar

but the socks. it always ends with the socks

(although the cat daydream was kinda awesome).

20th Century Fox's avatar

He’s a sock hoarder. He’s lonely. I figure I’ll write something nice for him soon. xx, Sylvie

Christian Meinke's avatar

These details pulled me in, Serge, Satie, the Cognac - I think I may have lived this imaginary life

20th Century Fox's avatar

I can see that!

Bertold Lagaro's avatar

Yvette would take offence if you called her Yvonne